Fantastic! I don't know whether it's just because I'm premenstrual or what, but reading about Clare meeting her brother for the first time made me cry.
I keep trying to spot the differences between this and the first draft, but you must be doing your job right because I can't find any, implying that it was the boring forgettable stuff you cut out anyway.
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Date: 2012-05-14 06:41 pm (UTC)I keep trying to spot the differences between this and the first draft, but you must be doing your job right because I can't find any, implying that it was the boring forgettable stuff you cut out anyway.
This is so great! Can't wait for tomorrow.