Re the airship and Jack's muscles -- I've added "Building and flying" because probably rigging it and keeping it running wasn't exactly light work. :)
One of the reasons I was as concerned about Ellis telling Clare's revelation as I was is because he also tells this part of the story, yeah. I don't think there's any way round it here, not like there (probably) is with the revelation, but I do fret a bit.
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Date: 2012-05-15 03:26 pm (UTC)One of the reasons I was as concerned about Ellis telling Clare's revelation as I was is because he also tells this part of the story, yeah. I don't think there's any way round it here, not like there (probably) is with the revelation, but I do fret a bit.